Daddy!
I missed you lots Daddy.
Why is Coral here? I hate her. She talks ta me like a baby. I’m a big boy. I’m five an’ in kinnergar’en.
Push me in th’ swings Daddy. Come on! Jus’ me an’ you.
I can walk by myse’f, Coral. I don’ wanna hold your hand.
You can’t play wi’f us. Daddy’s gonna push me.
Lookie Daddy! Lookie me! I’m flyin’. Higher Daddy, higher!
Daddy, Daddy, slow down. I wan’ out.
I can do’d it myse’f Coral. Stop. You’re mean, lemme go!
You’re not my mommy, I don’ hafta do what you say.
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So cute! You really captured a child’s voice. ^ ^
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I miss my girls talking like this. It’s so honest.
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I cannot help but wonder how much of his mothers hatred for Coral has filtered into him… You’ve done a great job with the child’s voice, very believable and likeable. Nicely done.
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Nice! So now I feel even more like Coral might not be a good person. Monday’s voice of Phoebe I thought might have been an unreliable narrator, but this kid seems to really not like Coral. We’ll see what everyone else has to say about her.
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