Daddy!
I missed you lots Daddy.
Why is Coral here? I hate her. She talks ta me like a baby. I’m a big boy. I’m five an’ in kinnergar’en.
Push me in th’ swings Daddy. Come on! Jus’ me an’ you.
I can walk by myse’f, Coral. I don’ wanna hold your hand.
You can’t play wi’f us. Daddy’s gonna push me.
Lookie Daddy! Lookie me! I’m flyin’. Higher Daddy, higher!
Daddy, Daddy, slow down. I wan’ out.
I can do’d it myse’f Coral. Stop. You’re mean, lemme go!
You’re not my mommy, I don’ hafta do what you say.
Thin spiral notebook 
He sounded like just a little boy, thoughts scattered all over the place, endless energy and the thught that he can do everything himself. Great voice.
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Coral seems nice, I think Phoebe’s fears can be allayed.
The poor kid, I feel sorry for him.
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Aw, the little kid. So independent, so in need of help. I don’t think Mom’s got anthing to worry about with Coral though!
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A unique child’s voice. I like how you left out some letters!
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I love the little hit at the end. Nice work.
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It’s always difficult to write the voice of a child, but I think you did a wonderful job — the impatience, the rapid change of thought processes, the uncensored bluntness. All gorgeous. 🙂
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I am sure his mother is pleased with his reluctance. I am interested to see how dad and Coral interpret things.
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Good job with the child’s voice! I can see that, just as his mom doesn’t want to share him with Coral, he doesn’t want to share his dad with her, either.
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Out of the mouths of babes 🙂 I wonder if Daddy will pay attention to his son’s feelings?
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