
Hanging from the tree house railing, impatiens swing in the breeze. His mother, standing at the edge of the pine needles, discovered the bones of a child wrapped in a pink blanket.

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Hanging from the tree house railing, impatiens swing in the breeze. His mother, standing at the edge of the pine needles, discovered the bones of a child wrapped in a pink blanket.

vivid, terrifying, a nightmare!
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Very vivid picture, then with the sock to the gut. Great job with this prompt!
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So sad
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Ohhh…poor kid & what a shocking discovery for the narrator’s mother!This is amazing writing Tara-loved it:-)
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Oh my, heartbreaking and vivid!
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Wow! You did really well with this one!
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Great reformation of the available words. A vivid and sad tale.
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oh, Tara! You went there.
good stuff!
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Oh, sadness! Heartbreaking piece here, which makes the lovely photo haunting.
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My goodness! Crushing…and I thought I was…… ah you artist you..you reached hard, and twisted inner senses there… you managed to create such impact, even with ‘other’ words…
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