Keeping my arms and legs pulled in tight, I dare not let them fall over the edge of my bed. I hear the scratching, feel the hot breath of what is lurking beneath.
Pale faces at my window, alien and distorted, paralyze me with fear. I shake my head, trying to dispel white noise voices that buzz inside my brain. I can’t escape from these aberrations.*
This week’s Trifextra challenge is to build on a previous 33-word entry, adding an additional 33 words
*Originally published March 30, 2012 as “White noise voices.”
Thin spiral notebook 
Visual and sensual piece. Makes me shiver. Great writing.
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This oozes Lovecraft. Which is one hell of a thing to ooze.
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Ooo. Creepy. Is it real or all imagination? Love it!
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This was a great example of expounding, and the first one I’ve seen where someone gave backstory rather than adding on to the prompt after. Great job!
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Can’t escape from these aberrations… great line. Are they real or imagined? Nicely done!
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Kicked it up a notch didn’t you? ~~~shudder!~~~
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