
Lies, sweet as honey,
Drip from her sanguine lips.
Lies that loop through your brain
Like a bad love song,
To finally lodge, heavy as a stone,
Underneath your heart,
Cold and immovable.

My journal of big words and pretty pictures

Lies, sweet as honey,
Drip from her sanguine lips.
Lies that loop through your brain
Like a bad love song,
To finally lodge, heavy as a stone,
Underneath your heart,
Cold and immovable.

Tara, your writing is as captivating as your picture. That picture literally took my breath away. The writing complements it well.
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Powerful stuff. Surely everyone who reads this will cringe, remembering a time when this happened to them.
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Well crafted! Congratulations on your recent wins!
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beautifully crafted, Tara.
one thing about lies . . . eventually they will be shown the light. 😦
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And the things they do there, stuck underneath the heart.
Beautiful words for a chilling truth, Tara. But I appreciate the chuckle of a bad love song, too!
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So true, when someone lies to you that you love it hurts so bad.
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And they just sit there, pulling at the heart. This is a great piece.
Thanks for linking up!
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Perfect poetry and so true.
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Such an awesome description.
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You can feel the sudden weight – and you brought home that sad truth, those lies hurt…your words were effective, and suddenly I feel them, from years ago!
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