Sweet as honey

bees on pink milkweed

Lies, sweet as honey,
Drip from her sanguine lips.
Lies that loop through your brain
Like a bad love song,
To finally lodge, heavy as a stone,
Underneath your heart,
Cold and immovable.

The Trifextra challenge this weekend is: 33 words, 30 of your own and three of the following: topple, paradigm, underneath, nerve, honey and/or loop

28 thoughts on “Sweet as honey

  1. Tara, your writing is as captivating as your picture. That picture literally took my breath away. The writing complements it well.

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  2. You can feel the sudden weight – and you brought home that sad truth, those lies hurt…your words were effective, and suddenly I feel them, from years ago!

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