Keeping my arms and legs pulled in tight, I dare not let them fall over the edge of my bed. I hear the scratching, feel the hot breath of what is lurking beneath.
Pale faces at my window, alien and distorted, paralyze me with fear. I shake my head, trying to dispel white noise voices that buzz inside my brain. I can’t escape from these aberrations.*
This week’s Trifextra challenge is to build on a previous 33-word entry, adding an additional 33 words
*Originally published March 30, 2012 as “White noise voices.”
Thin spiral notebook 
This is very creepy and well written. I feel like I’m in the room with her. I want to read more!
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Ok, now I am scared to look at my windows here. You added a great continuation.
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If the first part was a creepy story by a campfire, the second was the sudden cold wind that blew it out. You’ve got us even more hooked 😉
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This reminds me of my childhood terrors.
What IS the image?
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The photo is a negative image of a shattered window pane. I thought it looked cool, and kinda creepy.
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Such well chosen words make this deliciously frightening!
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Love the images here, so unsettling, and the itchy sounds and feelings really drill in. Well done.
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there’s a creep factor magnified by the amazing word choices. Gimme another 33, lady
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I’m so glad I’m not in my bed right now – minutes from lights out. You’ve just given me a second wind. 😯
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Ohhhhh man. I can’t help but feel like this is going to end badly if it ever gets to part 3.
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Oh yeah, because I don’t already have enough problems getting to sleep… *plugs in nightlight and pulls blankets over head* 😀
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