
It had to stop. The beatings, the vicious verbal attacks, the forced seclusion, all of it was over.
Had to be smart. She couldn’t let them trace it back to her.
“The only DNA we found was the victim’s. The hair is his.”
“Victim? I thought he had a heart attack. Co-workers said he was complaining of chest pains. Said it was like being stabbed in the heart. Now, you’re saying this wasn’t natural. That it was a homicide?’
“It definitely wasn’t natural, but I can’t prove it. And, I can’t prove who left this.”
“It’s just a doll!’
The 100 Word Challenge, a writing prompt created by Velvet Verbosity, takes a single theme to tell a story in only 100 words ~ no more, no less. This week’s theme is ‘Stabbed.’
Yes, agree with the sketchy doll commenter! Other than that, nice suspense and a great scene set.
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well done!
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Oh my!! Amazing!! I abslutely loved this….was hooked in immediately…love the addition o the doll. perfect.
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Loved it!
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That doll is sketchy as shit! A warning would have been nice 😉 I love when you write like this though- super talented!
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Good job. Cringing at this week’s word, though. Gives me the creeps. Next word, please!!!!
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I got a true crime /Patricia Cromwell vibe from reading this. That’s a compliment.
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Ah. Really good. I love voodoo stuff. This is crafted SO well.
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Very nice! I love suspense.
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That is a doll I never want in my image.
Excellent story.
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