
Atop your precarious perch,
Straddling a timeworn fence of indecision,
You teeter on the brink of falling
For anything…

My journal of big words and pretty pictures

Atop your precarious perch,
Straddling a timeworn fence of indecision,
You teeter on the brink of falling
For anything…

Very compact, very powerful. Loved it.
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Short and sweet, tight sentences….as always top notch writing, T.
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Very nice! You said much that was very impactful in those few words. That’s talent!
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Love this. That last line is perfection. Well done.
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So strong in principle, and I love how you crafted this. well done
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Lovely (and true!) words and photo. Thanks for adding beauty to my day!
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that last line is everyone’s true fear isn’t it? Of making the wrong decision?
I loved the picture but I loved the words more this time. An important lesson to learn as you straddle that fence.
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Tara, this is great and word choice perfect.
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I used to have dreams about walking on top of a fence, The colours are so intense and very beautiful.
Leslie
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