Dusty tunnels wend around inside my heart, cutting through the detritus of failed romances. You worm the tender, untouched marrow out of my decaying dreams of love with promises of happily ever after.
As the worm turns
My journal of big words and pretty pictures
Thin spiral notebook 
Really, really good!
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I keep seeing that worm as the promises, and the title slays me. Touché.
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Love the use of metaphor here. Well done.
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I like your original and intelligent take on this prompt. Hard to be evocative with a prompt so limiting. You managed that feat extremely well. Thank you.
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I wish I could like this more than once.
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Nice! This is 33 words well chosen.
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heh I love the title most of all. 🙂
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Fantastic job!
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Cute title for this post and like the phrases used.
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I enjoyed this.
A lot of detail and some great phrases in your 33 words. Loved the ‘ detritus of failed romances’ – now that’s heartache for you.
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