Doretha

mason of iced tea

Her bless-your-heart benedictions are her southern way of saying, “you’re addled, child.” Her mothball-scented hugs mean she loves you anyways. Come sit on the veranda, and have some sweet tea, you’ll feel better.

The Trifextra challenge this weekend is: 33 words about anything, but must include at least one hyphenated compound modifier.

22 thoughts on “Doretha

  1. Great story.
    ‘Mothball-scented hugs’ – reminds me of an old Aunt. Obviously moths were a greater threat in my youth than they are today!

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  2. I like how this includes more than one sense. The ears with the phrase, the nose with the mothballs scent, the mouth with the tea, and the eyes with the lovely veranda imagery.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  3. I’ve gotten a few ‘bless your hearts’ in my lifetime, though maybe not in that exact phrasing. No one ever offered me tea though ): haha this is really good!

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  4. Amazing writing. I love how you’ve engaged touch, taste, smell, and sound in those few sentences. Excellent!

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  5. Great job – I tried to go for more of the hyphenated words but one was all i could muster 😉 I really like this though, makes me want a hug AND some sweet tea… mmmsweettea

    Chuck

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