
“Sleek.”
It wasn’t the word she’d use, but he thought it described his persona perfectly. Black oily hair combed straight back, and jet eyes so dark you couldn’t see his pupils.
He reminded her of a wet otter. Even his grey suit was glossy, giving the illusion of him cutting through the room like an otter through water.
The way he strutted, she knew he thought of himself more a shark. That made her smile, turning away to not laugh aloud. Otter it was, silly and slightly inebriated.
A touch at her elbow, she wasn’t surprised his hand felt wet.
The 100 Word Challenge, a writing prompt created by Velvet Verbosity, takes a single theme to tell a story in only 100 words ~ no more, no less. This week’s theme is ‘Sleek.’
Great descriptions – your snarkiness tickled me. Hello – I’m a fist time 100 word paricpant – enjoyed reading yours!
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hey! I think I dated him once upon a time – a really long time ago. 🙂
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I can feel the grease from here. Bleh. I hate people like this!
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I can picture this guy too. Well done.
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Excellent! I can totally picture this guy!
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This is AWESOME! 🙂
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Ew. I almost had to wipe my hand off after reading this! Great job with the descriptions Tara!
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Unfortunately, I’ve met a few of those otters in the past! 🙂
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Otterly well written. I like the last line a lot, it brought a sweetness to the whole piece.
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I can honestly say I have never been one of those.
Wonderful piece, Tara. Made a big smile on my sleek face.
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