Humble servant

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Your body is my temple, and I worship at the altar to your love. Offering sacrificial kisses as sweet as milk and honey to appease my master.

A high priestess in your cloister, I carry my devotion in outstretched arms. A willingly given innocence is my benediction.

I drop to my knees, my head bowed in supplication, a deviant prayer spilling from my lips. Pleading for your benevolence, aching for your punishment. My penitence is to serve, and satiate your every desire.

With deep reverence to your divinity, I keep your commandments faithfully. Ever your humble servant, I unrepentantly submit.

The 100 Word Challenge is to tell a story in only 100 words. This week’s theme is “Reverence”


  1. “Fifty shades of” ….wouldn’t it be nice to be served instead of servant?
    It read well, but my heart twisted for her /him. Giving yourself willingly doesn’t always guarantee a respectful reciprocal act.

    Great use of that word for Velvet.


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