It’s fall, the harvest will come soon. Ripe pomes just right for picking, heavy with juicy flesh, white as porcelain, flawless and tender. The hungry are poised beneath laden limbs, arms outstretched to catch their bounty.
Standing outside the tree line, he marvels at their ignorance. He knows she is tainted, that the fruit so eagerly anticipated is corrupt.
He wonders if he should rescue them, climb the gnarled bough and take her for himself. Expose her for the infection she is, toxic to the core.
They wouldn’t believe him. Possessed, they’d clamor to steal her away.
I liked it. Great descriptive sense. My only crit is: “dangle on” should probably be “dangle from”.
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I see you “found” your apple picture. 😉 I knew you would take your own, and a lovely shot it is. Why would you want to use anyone else’s? Great piece, sorry I’ve been behind on making rounds. Thank god y’all keep coming back despite me, lol!
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