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Koi ponds, replete with lilies
So serene, sanctums of tranquility
Beneath the passive green
Amongst a placid school of anthropophagites
Red piranha stripped bones settle into the fine, powder silt.
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Thin spiral notebook
My journal of big words and pretty pictures
I agree, gorgeous imagery!
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Powerful and vivid writing. Plus I learned a new word!
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“anthropophagites” – creepy! (I had to look it up, but feel better because I wasn’t the only one :))
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Wow, this is powerful! Well done!
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ahhh Tara – I had to look it up – makes the piece all the more chilling. 🙂
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Nice contrasts. I had to look a couple things up.
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outstanding
This would be a great opening scene of a film because the bones say thousands of words. well done, partner
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stay away from that one – in calm waters there be maneaters – anthropophagites – nice word had to look it up but now that i look at it breaks up nicely into meaning from anthro and phagites 🙂
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Ooooo. I love this take!
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Gorgeous imagery. Beautifully done!
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