As charms on a bracelet

Wandering among granite and wrought iron walls
Tracing epitaphs etched, dates neglected
Wrapped in lingering sorrow like prayer shawls

As charms on a bracelets, souls Death collected
Trinkets meant to amuse and entertain
No more precious than bits of bone dissected

Yet each cherished in a heart, love doth sustain
Relics kept secret even from the grave
Beloved and mourned, still Death cannot deign

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, earth tombs enslave
Flying free, spirits soar away from bonds held tight
Beyond granite stones, time and space forgave

Trifecta, a weekly one-word prompt, challenges writers to use that word in its third definition form, using no less than 33 words or no more than 333. The week’s prompt is: Death [noun \ˈdeth\] 3: capitalized : the destroyer of life represented usually as a skeleton with a scythe

Also submitted to WordPress Weekly Challenge. This week the theme is “Now for Something Completely Different.” Participants were asked to step outside of their comfort zone. While I post Americanized haiku regularly, I don’t typically write other styles of poetry, especially ones that rhyme.

This form, Tezra Rima, a poem written with 10-11 syllable lines, is arranged in three-lined tercets with the rhyming pattern of A-B-A, B-C-B, C-D-C, D-E-D.

17 thoughts on “As charms on a bracelet

  1. This is gorgeous. If you hadn’t boldened Death, I wouldn’t have noticed it placed. This is eerie but poetic and well done.

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  2. This is the most elegant of the Trifecta Death poems I’ve encountered so far. There is such emotion, yet you are careful in picking your words. The concept of earthbound bodies and souls flying appeals to me. It’s how I think of death. Given the subject matter, this may seem like an odd comment, but it’s really lovely. Amy (and here is mine)

    Psych Ward Visitor

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