First Born
King of Everything
Frozen Hell Blvd
High Horse, TN 04161
Dear First,
Our estrangement is undoubtedly my fault and deserves an apology.
I’m sorry you’re an arrogant and judgmental prick, and apologize our familial relationship precludes addressing you as “motherfucker” or “son of a bitch.”
Sincerely,
The Other One
The Week 12 Trifextra challenge for this weekend was to write a letter of apology, fact or fiction, using only 33 words – excluding addresses, salutations and closings.
Thin spiral notebook 
Man, oh man, but I can relate. I had 3 prodigal daughters. So much heartache, anger and sorrow. Good job with the prompt.
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Well written! Your address is so clever.
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I wanted to say my favorite part is… but every line (including the address!) is my favorite.
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I know a few people who could have written that very same sentiment.
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Mostly, I like the line: “our familial relationship precludes addressing you as “motherfucker” or “son of a bitch”.
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Yeah, swear words tend to get the message through.
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rofllmao…oh dear lord is this what I have to look forward to? Except I truly believe it will be my second who causes me so much grief
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Powerful and emotional and just an amazing write. This one will be on my mind all night.
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Hate notes are so awesome! I lost mine long ago and hope someday to find it!
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so glad that even though I am considered the oldest, I am not the first born.
beautifully, brutally honest. I’m sorry.
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real, raw, brutal, honest, and damn oh damn can I relate.
Consider this comment a hug and a “i know how you feel”
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