A Mother’s work is never done. I send hurricanes, earthquakes, blizzards, and none of it gets your attention very long. You have destroyed every gift I’ve given you. Now, clean up this mess!
This weekend’s Trifextra challenge is to write a story or snippet of a story which includes, in exactly 33 words, a justified exclamation point.
Thin spiral notebook 
Timely, timely. Remember the movie where George Burns played God and was asked why everything on Earth was such a mess? God answered, “But I’ve given you everything.”
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Ah, Mother Nature… love to hate her sometimes but she sure knows how to capture her children’s attention, huh? Brilliant piece.
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I love Mother love!!! 🙂
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Powerful post. Makes me want to bow my head and say, “Yes, Ma’am.”
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Beautiful … the idea and its execution is just perfect.
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Great job with this prompt, I love the powerful weather visuals and the stern speaking voice!
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Great idea and well written!
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That’s hilarious! I love the picture – so very appropriate! (Another appropriate exclamation point.)
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oh Mother Nature…we have been such disappointments
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yes ma’am. These branches you blew down last night in the thunderstorm will be bagged by tomorrow morning.
well done. From metphor to prompt delivery.
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