No swimming

Water swift and deep
Struggling in the current
No swimming allowed

* Haiku Friday is hosted by Lou at LouCeeL.

3 Comments Add yours

  1. Sounds like good advice to me…but then again, I’m a nonswimmer! :)


  2. S Basu says:

    beautiful haiku on a tough prompt. good one. :)


  3. Lou Lohman says:

    I’ll bet Tarzan could swim there if he wanted to. I’m just sayin.

    Very evocative ‘Ku. Well done you, as always. And if we don’t communicate sooner – have a GREAT Thanksgiving. xoxoxox


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